9H.Your Feedback and Suggestions

No author can develop without critics. Self-development is an ongoing process and intelligent readers can accelerate it with their valuable analysis and suggestions.
I am very thankful to all the people who took out their precious time to read my work. Any suggestions/feedback are heartily welcome.
(Consider telling us about your favourite chapter, favourite characters/ lines, the parts you liked the most, what could be done better etc..)

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Published in: on February 23, 2009 at 6:20 pm  Comments (20)  

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  1. Fav chptr- Ch3 Cold coffee 8 lotus
    Gopu’s love letter is d funniest part of d story.
    And I really liked d line -” Not loving sm1 anymor is neithr suficint nor necesary 2 mov on.”

  2. read it.
    it was awesome!unbelievable!
    actually m left wid no words.

  3. My favourite line in the whole novel-
    “Every project, every book, every movie is somebody’s dream. If we cannot appreciate the project, we should at least not depreciate the efforts of the one who has toiled meticulously over his dream-project.”
    Awesome line Dj!!

    The best part is the DIARY one 🙂

    Great work!!

  4. Fav Ch- Ch7 Hpy B’dy Mitsu

    Favourite character- Naaket 😉

    Fav line- One should have a single aim in mind- and the word “aim” here is replaceable with the word “girl”. You try catching two boats and you’ll drown for sure. (from ch-2)

    Fav parts- 1.D way mitsu proposes…i mean …that diary..500 pages..rely cute…d best kinda proposal

    2.Varshaan’s 3 golden words

    Wt cud b done btr- d move on tips r realy boring. initial chs r funny;chp 4,5 n 6 hv lost momentum but d last 3 r fantabulous!
    Gud job overall..i think u can write btr
    Gud luc

  5. great great great work..simply superb divya..evn i wish 2 write a book..n u also inspire me n others..bt ur way of presentation is superb..ur soch as u sd..awesum..i jus loved d whole book..fantastic thinking n creativity..all d best for ur life n future..
    regards,
    bhumika thakkar

  6. arrre wah ! great writing capabilities.It’s Hillarious !! LOL:-) really good stuff , i really liked the descritpive capabilities
    it’s great to have such brilliant studetnts amongst us

  7. congratulations lady! commendable maiden effort! lots of deja vu..
    keep up the good work.all my best wishes
    Hitesh Chimnani

  8. hey i can’t believe u r just 20.
    well…thnx 2 sandeep..i came across ur novel thru dis link:
    http://caclubindia.com/profile.asp?member_id=152390

  9. DJ the novel IS FANTASTIC
    CONGRATES U R SUPERB…………………..

  10. WHAT WE THINK ABOUT AND THANK ABOUT WE BRING ABOUT

    SO,, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL NOVEL AND IT IS DEFINITELY AN INSPIRATION FOR ALL OF US.
    I’LL BE LOOKING FORWARD FOR ANOTHER NOVEL FROM YOU.

    THE BEST CHAPTER WAS “CH 9 WONDERFUL WOMEN”
    THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN

  11. NEEDS A LOT OF IMPROVEMENT…STORY GETS A LITTLE DEVIATED FROM THE MAIN TOPIC..THOUGH ITZ A NICE AND A MOTIVATING ATTEMPT BUT LOSES CHARM AFTER A PHASE…

  12. hey dat ws really ausumn……..you know i dnt believe in luv….bt likd ur story…i used to hate luv …bt nw m nt…..b stil dnt able to beliv in luv……n dnt wan to………nt cuz f hatred………i really appreciate dis story .its really nice……n sumdy i wud lik to meet characers lik dem……really go on all f u.wud lik to read some more 4m u……….

  13. Fell in love all over again with myself. Life seems to present us with a lot of situations when we are unprepared for them. You seem to be an angel who god send so that we ( and specially I ) were going to get help from. As for the time of writing, I was going to commit suicide tomorrow but you made me fall in love with me. I’m happy to exist in hopes that someday i’ll find myself somewhere…

  14. hi divya,,
    had a beautiful experience going through the novel.
    deviated a bit in between but bounced back very well..
    could feel the purity thats ought to be maintained in a relationship.
    good work. keep it up…

  15. hey divya u rock…………..i just love reading ur novel……….ur writing skills r mind blowing……keep writing……. n i’ll keep reading……..gr888 work done…….congr888s…..n all d bst for ur bright future…………keep smiling 🙂

  16. gr8 work dear.. really fun to read ur work..

    maaza aa gya.. fulltoo indori

  17. Hi Divya,
    What a touching, soul-wrenching, heartfelt, funny and an awesome. I just couldn’t let go without completing the entire thing. Great!

  18. “Golden words” stands out as the most well written and beautiful chapter in your whole story. The trail of thoughts that goes thru the character’s mind after varshaan’s words ‘SO WAS I’ make a wonderful read. Actually the whole para beginning wid the lines “This episode in my life had taught me a lesson……….” is a fabulous piece of writing.
    Keep up the good work!
    God bless!

  19. And the use of simileys to describe mitsu when she enters the class on her birthday is classic. Just loved the comparisons u made. 🙂

  20. Wow! A hundred thousand blog views so far!! Congrats!
    Hope u have much more in store.
    Looking forward to read more of your workpieces..


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